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Karen Swallow Prior's avatar

I’ve been thinking about this poem all week. Your comments, friends, have been so rich. My attention was just drawn to these lines, lines that really must be read and heard *just right* I think to really get:

Have I no harvest but a thorn

To let me blood, and not restore

What I have lost with cordial fruit?

Let me paraphrase this passage a bit because I think it contains so much.

It’s asking/saying: Do I have no harvest but a thorn that draws my blood and does not restore that blood with any fruit?

And here”cordial” refers also to wine … Christ’s blood. Herbert sees no fruit from this thorny vine. He also does not see the restoration of his suffering and labor with Christ’s blood.

By the end, he’s come to his senses, but here he is questioning it and questioning everything.

So powerful. So real.

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Richard Myerscough's avatar

Just, wow - what an intense and intensely honest and vivid expression of the conflict inherent, it seems, in all calling. Such wrestling. And to conclude it with an apparent allusion to the calling of Samuel which reads so mild by comparison is very affecting.

In his book, Music After Midnight: The Life and Poetry of George Herbert, John Drury observes that "‘The Altar’ and ‘Easter-wings’ ... are shaped and physically formed like their subjects. Those poems, however, make shapes to fit order. The marvel of ‘The Collar’ is that it makes a shape to fit disorder. There was, perhaps, nothing like that again until T. S. Eliot wrote The Waste Land." He also quotes Herbert's brother Edward saying of his sibling, ‘he was not exempt from passion and choler' and comments that "The Herberts were an inflammable lot. ‘Choler’ sounds just like ‘Collar’..."

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